It's great, Boss! The way you pictured Tan Beng San's agony is very convincing. You'll go far with this one.
Maybe you should check with the publisher Gema Silat first. They own the copy right of all Kho Ping Hoo's work, right? I don't know whether they're still operational or not. If they are, well, they might be interested to be your backer. If i remember correctly, Yanes (who illustrated many of Kho's books) once created a comic 'Pukulan Tangan Dewa', story by Kho Ping Hoo.